What do you think bout my lyrics?

I record a song last saturday. and it's called 'right girl'. i was just wondering what you think bout my lyrics. be frank. here's my lyrics. You wanna hear it? I'm at d_atala1989@hotmail.com add me to your msn i'll send you.



Right Girl (featuring. Double D)

Young Age featuring Darren

(Intro-Young Age ft. Darren)

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Ugh

Double D



(Verse 1-Young Age)

First time in my life now!

That I’ve been so committed

This girl by my side up in my mind have got me think clear

Got the softest shoulder in the world for me to lean on

No doubts in my mind she got it all for me to feed on

So Beautiful Intelligent she even rolls my w*** up

Hair black back stacks she everything I fear none

Am dealing with that type of girl ya’ll n***** been waiting on

Nails polish every week she got no kids to baby seat



(CHORUS-Darren)

I think I’ve found the right girl think am gonna wife her

The way she move she drives me crazy

Can’t let go she got that good stuff really got me caught up

Cause I know that she gone never play me (2x)



(Verse 2-Young Age)

Body so thick brick sick with em jeans on

She wears my triple x shirt good with em “thangs on”

Of course there’s ups and downs but walk it out we make it all right

I never slap my b**** in front my n**** when it seems wrong

I Wait until them n***** gone am strong enough to hold on

Me I got the patience for the lady when they act wrong

I understand we human you the one they all want

Me I got the patience for the women when they making up

Making up before a show or making up before we roll

Cause I want my girl be looking good whenever she leaves home

She everything I ever want we’ve only met for three months

How come you got no patience but you hanged in there for nine months



(Chorus-Darren)

I think I’ve found the right girl think am gonna wife her

The way she move she drives me crazy

Can’t let go she got that good stuff really got me caught up

Cause I know she gone never play me (2x)



(Bridge-Darren)

I love my lil mama she so tight holds her in my arms it’s all right

She understand all the nights that I have to grind

Wait there all night just like a guard



(Verse 3- Young Age)

Ugh

Ugh

Heard allot of rumors YES

How I am a play boy

Everyday a different girl I l** em and I leave em

I denied say it’s all a lie cause you the one they all want

You the one they can’t have, so they’ll be spreading vicious lies

Stay focus and visualize in what you do just keep it tight get em h***** of your mind

As this can drag you out my sight

You the one that’s in my life so beautiful and rare to find

You the one that’s in my life 1 in a mill so rare to find



(Chorus-Darren)

I think I’ve found the right girl think am gonna wife her

The way she moves she drives me crazy

Can’t let go she got that good stuff really got me caught up

Cause I know she gone never play me (2x)



(Bridge Darren)

I love my lil mama she so tight holds her in my arms it’s all right

She understand all the nights that I have to grind

Wait there all night just like a guardWhat do you think bout my lyrics?
THEY SOUNDED GOOD

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