Was all your stuff pack ready to go on the floor
I asked ';what's this about?'; ';why is your stuff packed for?';
You said ';this is the last time and you can't take this no more';
We're goin back and forth like we're in the middle of a war
Everything you tell me you say I just ignore
And that you've given me this warning a million times before
Hearing this makes my emotions all mix at once inside
She said if I wanted her to stay,I could have said something, I could have tried
She picked up her bags and walked right past me, and left my side
Moment after that I became teary-eyed
What left me in this situation was my stubborn pride
For a few days i thought about you and cried
Behind this fought exterior is just a man who's trying to hide
It's been a few months and I'm still not over it
I know I messed up and that's something I must admit
Because when you left, that's when my heart split
After what happened, I wish I could relive the past
I would change all the mistakes that I made
And I know you deserve better than how I treated you
All of my apologies are long overdue
Over time you say I changed for the worse
And now I realize that everything you said was right
I have some things on my mind, things to say
If I went back in time to that heart crushing day
I would begged you to please stay
I would ask you not to turn away
I just want eveything to be okay
But it won't, so just please stay
I found out that you moved on to another love
While I'm still stuck wondering if I have another chance with you
Praying so I can hear you say my name just one more time
This is a mountain that is impossible for me to climb
If it took all my money to get you back I'd go ahead and spend every dime
I'd go around the just get your love back
Lonelyness is the enemy and my heart is under attack
And I kno I sound like a broken track begging for you to come back
But I want to get my point across that I need you in my life
Cuz without you there's no me and I'm not ready to face that reality
You're messing with my mentality
Without you I can't think straight
My mind is so distracted, because every thought I have involves you
Remember when we used to argue and now I missing you around
I'm stuck in this pond, save me please don't let me drown
And now on the inside I'm burning up knowing that you hold someone elses heart
I know there's no chance, but can I call a restart?
This is the first time in years that we've been apart
The worlds zooming by me, I'm so zoned
Your so far away, I can't even reach you
If you tell me to come get you, I'll pursue
But as of right now I don't know what to do
After what happened, I wish I could relive the past
I would change all the mistakes that I made
And I know you deserve better than how I treated you
All of my apologies are long overdue
Over time you say I changed for the worse
And now I realize that everything you said was right
I have some things on my mind, things to say
If I went back in time to that heart crushing day
I would begged you to please stay
I would ask you not to turn away
I just want eveything to be okay
But it won't, so just please stay
Just stay, please stay, I need you to stay....Do you like these lyrics?
It's okay but you keep changing the point of view of the reader from them being the person whom is leaving you (when you said ';you';) and the reader sitting there watching everything play out (when you said ';she';) fix this and it will be better.Do you like these lyrics?
its ok u put in alot of effort put it on youtube
Awesome!
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your saying to much, you dont say every thought, like ';then she said'; and like ';why is your stuff packed for?'; that doesnt even make sense, and is boring its needs to be unique
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